Senior Flange Technician
Andy!
Some people's Haiku's
don't follow the rules at all
are you quite stupid?
don't follow the rules at all
are you quite stupid?
Djamal Abdoun said
I do not have a big head
I live in a shed
That's a proper poem, it rhymes and everything.
Dan Harding, Matt Derbyshire endorse
Campiagn for no criticism of individual players
Captain Sinister key to promotion
Meanwhile Jamie can dribble and score
We all agree Paterson's better than Messi
Soon better than Pele too?
Damn sorry - went 5 words, 7 words, 5 words instead.Something has gone awry with your Haiku structure:
3 lines
5 syllables, then 7 syllables, then 5 again.
Of course we could always start the Forest Blank Verse Thread, where everything had to be written in Iambic Pentameter, with rhyming couplets
one two three four five
once i caught a fish alive
the next line dont fit
Hear?